Reviews for MAZE POETRY
Storyteller's Shadow chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
It is quite amazing. Be careful not to rhyme just for the sake of rhyming. Sometimes it seems the rhymes are forced. I beleive your poem will be just as good (if not better, since mazes have no such structure) without such orderly rhyming. One question, what do the numbers mean? I quite enjoy the dark feeling this poem gives off.