| Reviews for Crash and Burn |
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   AvegaLil chapter 1 . 4/27/2021 So beautifully written I stayed up half the night to finish it. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or |
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/28/2012 what is the title of the sequel? |
| LDS Dreamer chapter 24 . 11/5/2011 I just read this and I think it is AWESOME! I want the sequel! This was so cool and even though I was disapointed that she and Lucas weren't getting together, I thought it was a good ending. Is she going to spark interest in Trace? I really want her to for some reason. |
| Mei chapter 8 . 1/16/2011 As I read this story, the only thing that really catches my attention is that (in trope speak) it's almost like a reverse betty and veronica... then again, I don't actually know the whole plotline. :P Anyways, I like it so far and hope to see more good work. :D xoxo mei |
| shanaenae123 chapter 24 . 1/10/2011 awe... it's over :l i love this story! |
| shanaenae123 chapter 23 . 1/10/2011 hahahahaha atleast you updated :D |
| July Tarrant chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 personally, i loved the ending. i am all for breaking stereotypes and making it untradiotional XD can't wait to see what jamie does in ireland XD |
| AbbeyXD chapter 23 . 1/9/2011 very cute! love it :) |
| chewychester chapter 23 . 1/9/2011 You don't have to apologize. It was good, I was just telling you my feelings over it. Not liking how she treating Lucas. I hope this turns in another direction. |
| CaNnAbIsCaToNtHeLoOsE chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 It was a cool way to end it. Very un-traditional but it definitely worked. Can't wait for the sequel! It's cool that it'll be based in Ireland. For me it will be more familiar grounds, ya know? Congrats on an amazing story!, Cat. |
| Da-zGreen chapter 24 . 1/9/2011 hahahah.. I guess this answers my quesiton of how many chapters are left? Lol... As for the sequel, will lUcas be coming back? Anyways, this was a good ending... It gets us really curious, about if they are ever going to mend their little broken friendship and will that friendship grow into something bigger! I really love it... Thank you for posting this story up and giving us the chance to read it. I hope to read more from you and I hope, that that sequel will come up soon! Good luck on any writing you do! |
| Da-zGreen chapter 23 . 1/9/2011 Aw, Poor doggie! :( Anyways, I love this chapter... But as you were mentioning a sequel to some of your readers... I can't help but wonder if its going to be about Lucas and Jamie? Lol... I'm very curious... Lol.. Anyways, poor Lucas... He's trying to do his hardest but she doesn't seem to like him in the way he wants her too. But I mean whose fault is that... It's his for not noticing her when she was head over heels for him... Lol Hope you update soon! How many chapters are left? |
| mylittlePRINCESS chapter 22 . 1/7/2011 LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT PLEASE UP DATE SOON |
| mylittlePRINCESS chapter 1 . 1/6/2011 Please update soon I am in love with this story and need to know what happens next! |
| Ticah chapter 7 . 1/2/2011 One of the things I've noticed in this story is that the vernacular is so awkward. It's not really consistent either. Because of this, the characters don't feel real at all, and it makes me feel like I'm reading a warped fairy tale (with the dramatic/cliche pasts and such). The relationships you've shown are interesting though, and I hope you continue to develop all the characters. Overall, the writing is about so-so. The descriptive language is decent, but nothing extraordinary, and the characters aren't exactly original or captivating, but there's room to move. You've got some raw ability here that can easily be polished. After you've completed the story, I'll probably come by to check it. Keep writing! - Ticah |