| Reviews for Crash and Burn |
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   C. Regeling chapter 5 . 8/24/2009 I like the story so far... but I'm not sure I like that you write 'Gawd' instead of 'God', I'm not saying that you shouldn't, it's your story do what you like, but more that you should write it how it's supposed to be spelt and write that she says is differently rather then trying to write it that way. |
| SunsetRainbow chapter 5 . 8/24/2009 I really liked it Not the best intro but nice story (: |
| killer chipmunk chapter 4 . 8/19/2009 So far it's good. can't really think of anything that needs specific editing so you're good. KC |
| Kennie chapter 4 . 8/18/2009 I'm not signed in right now, but that's okay. Boys suck large, dirty monkey toes dear. But you updated :) :) :) And now, as always, I think you need to update again. I wanna see what happens when/if Lucas sees her! |
| writerinsanity chapter 4 . 8/18/2009 MORE!. I love this story and I want to find out what happend with Lucas, and Faith's boyfriend. Plus what is up with Des's cusin? |
| Arabea chapter 4 . 8/17/2009 Uh-oh! Dum Dum Dum! lol. There be troublin a brewin in McDonald's. That's another reason I don't go there. There's just too much drama. lmao. ;) |
| Stooped chapter 4 . 8/17/2009 I like this! It's really good! UPDATE SOON! |
| Equestrian Star chapter 4 . 8/17/2009 last u update! i hope the story gets going it soon! it has a great beginning and im hooked! i so want to read more! so update soon! heart ya ES |
| Equestrian Star chapter 3 . 7/15/2009 aww u have to update this story! the story has an awesome starting! u've totally hooked me on the story now u just have to finish it! i know its best to work on one or two stories but i must say this one sounds the most appealing! plz keep updating! heart ya ES |
| Equestrian Star chapter 2 . 7/15/2009 so Jamie and Jace have different dads? i can't wait to find out the history between Jamie and Lucas! plz update! u started this, now finish it! the story should be fun! not 'backburner'! heart ya ES |
| Equestrian Star chapter 1 . 7/15/2009 aww this story is so cute! i think u should continue it! its a great start and it sounds like something that would be fun to write. an easy story as some might say, like a brake from stories that have the deep message (there still should be a message). i mean like one of those type of books u read for the fun of it and that's not mind crushing where u have to think about everything (not like Animal Farm or the Giver, those books r not for fun books *shiver*). i seriously think u should keep writing! heart ya ES |
| Arabea chapter 3 . 7/9/2009 I haven't updated at all this summer. So, yeah. I fail. lol. I also think that random blind dates are completely and totally unfair. Because when my friends come up with ideas of guys I should date, I nearly vomit. They're all gross. lol. I also hate arrogant guys. / Big turn-off. Ack! Well, it made me giggle a bit - I'm freaking out b/c I have to get to sleep...have to get up early. lol. Anyways, good chapter. |
| AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 3 . 7/9/2009 Hmm nope! You can concentrate on this story if you'd like! I enjoy this one a lot. The plot i mean since it hasn't gone too far...update soon! |
| Rynx chapter 3 . 7/9/2009 cute story! |
| bbyxhann chapter 2 . 6/23/2009 lol this is pretty good , update it please ! (: |