Reviews for LightDark
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
I think the latter section was a bit stronger then the opening part. I loved: "Whispers make their way toward my thin exterior." Keep up the good work.

Much love,

ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Wow, that was really really good. Can I ask, Why is there such a contrast between the mood in the first verse and the mood in the second? Was it realisation of how life really isnt that great? Any way, beautiful writing.