probably one of the best poems i've read on fictionpress so far (well, in my opinion. i'm not big on poetry xD ) easy to understand with good word flow. and the message really strikes a nail, and the way you convey it is wonderfully done. i like how you say the stone scrapes and bleeds, and the meadow only left grass stains. it was a good analogy thing. soo yeah, i really liked it. i'll add it to my favorite stories (which i'm kinda picky with haha). so good job :)