omg omg omg omg really could really happen.i dont want a knife stuck up my penis.

finally finished i love this!

Hmm, nice plot idea. I like the writing, but numbers should be written out in words like 8 would be eight. Also when you start a new sentence/paragraph be careful to use capital letters. ANd commas go in side quotation marks. I like your amount of cursing, and the realism of this. :)

I really liked the story!

Well the end does kind of seem dues ex machina, what with Kyle's revelation, though I guess if it were in real life that's about all the forewarning we'd get. The ending did seem rushed, but in retrospect it's probably best that it ended on a happy note.

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Been awhile hasn't it.

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Ironic that a murderer would want another murderer put behind bars isn't it?

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Damn that Shana! Ha-ha. I really like this chapter, it was really raw with emotion.

Ok cutting a guy's penis off is seriously creepy. I'm sorry I'm sure every guy reading this just became scared.

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Never kill twice in a row, always give it several months or years. She'd better be ready to run to Mexico/Canada fast.

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Freaky.

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Well as I read this at four thirty in the morning I understand the saying no rest for the wicked. Good story.

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My goodness! That's a sick and disturbing story! Although if you like that sort of thing it is a really good story. I don't think I am going to finish your story because I am not into this sorta thing. Good luck with reviews and such though.

-TennisChik12

When i first saw this story i thought it would be just like all the other stories i had read, but when i read it i was pleasantly suprised to find that it is actually a really good story! unlike most stories where everyone knows what's going to happen, you keep me guessing, and you actually keep me interested in this story, which most authors are unable to do. i also love the fact that you update so quickly. most authors go weeks without updating, which erks me, but you get the chapters up really fast! But one thing i would like to point out, is that the grammar could be a little bit better, but that's because i'm extremely picky on grammar. in fact, i didn't even realise the grammar issues until about the 5th or 6th chapter. other than that, i think the story is awesome! i don't know why more people haven't reviewed it, because i personally think it's the best continuing story i have read on this site.

Ok guys, sorry if this chapter is a little crazy, the rest will be better, I promise!