|Reviews for you lost your wings to your pride|
| detache chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Woah. It's... poingant. If I spelt that right. Hopefully you know what I mean. Hell, that might not even be the right word.
Would you care to elaborate a bit? Or are you a person who let's the reader take it for what it is, and doesn't give their own perspective as an author? That's not a bad thing so don't think it is. That kind of made it sound like it was. XD I'm stupid.
| all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
i like it.
i have a problem with large stanzas of poetry though.
(it's just me.)