Reviews for this is where you bring the girls
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
i love how you used pussy in a poem. LOL.

i like it;

but, to be honest, i like the first line better than the rest of it.
your sweet suicide chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
i feel what you are saying but you should try and come from a different approach then just stating what is happenin, could use work. but keep it up