|Reviews for Keeping the Population under Check|
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I think the beauty of war poetry is it allows to to explore literally every single theme you might want to.
I liked the section with alternate italic lines because it's like death in slow motion - every line I read I thought I was closer to death.
Excellent work )
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
that's a good name for war...keeping the population under check. sad but true.
| ChindianDude chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
A poignant and skifully crafted poem. In short, I like it.