Reviews for Keeping the Population under Check
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I think the beauty of war poetry is it allows to to explore literally every single theme you might want to.

I liked the section with alternate italic lines because it's like death in slow motion - every line I read I thought I was closer to death.

Excellent work )
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
that's a good name for war...keeping the population under check. sad but true.
ChindianDude chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
A poignant and skifully crafted poem. In short, I like it.