Reviews for we need more doritos
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
oh, this is crazy good.

the comparison of glowsticks to stars...fantastic.

and the carelessness of the whole piece is very alluring.

favorite.
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
you already know how i feel about this.

even though i don't like weed, this just has a kind of surreal, friday-night-in-the-basement-with-friends kinda feeling that i love.

the one thing i would suggest is to add a comma between float and they.

"your fingertips don't float, they crash."

but then again, i am addicted to commas.

so maybe not.