Reviews for Eternal Love
Keree chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
An enpowering moment for you. So proud! (claps histaricly)

This is a very nice peice of work.

Ribbon on the Rose chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Wow, i love it... i love every story i've read so far! you write very well!
VictorInChrist chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
It is wonderful how such a profound thing as God's love and Christ's salvation, somthing our mind cannot begin to fully comprehend, can be expressed so simply that a child can understand. This poem reminds me of that concept. It is short, sweet and simple, but contains a wonderful message. Good job. I love anyhting that gives the glory to God like this, keep it up :) May the Lord bless and lead you. :)
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
This is short and sweet and to the point. Nice rhyme also.
Azaleia chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Beautiful. Inspiring. Heartfelt. Memorable.

I love this poem... its so... awesome!

Keep writing! You have amazing talent!
Savella chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
It's so funny, I love it! It makes me picture Jesus in a Superman cape, standing on a cliff as the wind blows dramatically through His hair! Lol, yeah, I'm weird. The only useful criticism I can give you is that the ending seems a little too abrupt. I don't know why, though. It may be just me... _

All in all, yay! I like it! That should be the official poem for Godspell!