Reviews for A Tree's Legacy
searchlight chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Wow, I am impressed yet again by your skill. The last line does such a good job of tying it up and the whole idea is great. I never thought about the comparison of the tree which bore the fruit that damned us and the cross. Really cool.
Lily Among Thorns '98 chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Really great poem. One question/critique, is the 'on' in this line "The tree is wrought and twisted to an instrument on pain-" supposed to be 'of'

Much better than the tree poem I had to write for english once.