Reviews for How Do I Get Out Of This One?
Little Bitter Pearl chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Creepy...could go either way. There's still time for him to show up and save her...but you could do a lot with PTSS if Marcus rapes know, I'd like to see you write something light and fluffy. You should write something blissful with a happy ending, where no one cries or anything. They say that that kind of stuff is hard to write.
little bitter pearl chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
CREPY! Seriously, very creepy, but very good. gives me chills every time i read it. I like how nothing actually happens at the end, but much is suggested. The reader is left wondering, "Is he going to rape her, or will Venitus come in time, and if he does, what happens?" It is a very excellent cliffhanger.