| Reviews for Long Lost |
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   Rois and Cross chapter 4 . 12/19/2012 You have an interesting story though it could do with more discriptive writing |
| DD chapter 4 . 10/1/2012 Well damn found a total jewel and it hasn't been updated, hope you update soon. :) really awesome. |
| Smartgirl94 chapter 4 . 7/31/2011 This is really good, PLease update soon :D |
| AbbeyXD chapter 4 . 1/8/2011 wow, interesting, hope you update soon |
| Theresa98 chapter 4 . 7/2/2010 Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story. It's very good! And I just love Shaelyn and Nathaniel! |
| LeTalyn chapter 4 . 5/8/2010 Wow! I love your story! Your characters are so interesting, and the story just draws me in! I can't wait to read more! |
| Cafana989 chapter 4 . 12/17/2009 please update soon! |
| Naephrowyn chapter 4 . 10/21/2009 I like the story! keep updating I'm eager to read more !~ :] |
| smurf-love chapter 3 . 4/16/2009 i read your other one a decided to read this one, its good to...the beast sound exciting, cant wait to seeif he cant control it much longer and taes her without her wanting it...lol keep writing |
| ThisLittleAsian chapter 4 . 3/13/2009 OMG I love your story. I was hoked after just reading the first chapter. I love how you made nathaniel a sweet type of guy and ten theres the brute fo a demon inside. I LOVE THE CONTRAST OF IT! I think you are a wonderful writer so please dont stop writing |
| Ck90 chapter 4 . 2/27/2009 She is being rented to another demon? How does Nathaniels beast feel about that? Was he the one who ordered it? Can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON! |
| Ck90 chapter 3 . 2/27/2009 DELETE IT? iT'S getting good! and yes it did answer all the questions that I had, and more! It is so cool, i kind of feel bad for the beast. He is just too naughty for his own good! I will read the next chapter later and post a review, but now I have to get to class! *tear* |
| Dire Ashen Eyes chapter 4 . 2/26/2009 I have to say, it's a good concept, but there are tho things I would note: don't rush. Take as many chapters as you need, give some detail and description. The only other thing is, give the characters some depth. Shealyn shouldn't cry all the time, give her some strength; something that the reader can associate with and relate too. |
| dreamercrys chapter 4 . 2/26/2009 Oh...poor Nathaniel... He just wants to be loved... I think she needs to loosen up a little bit... Isn't her being someone elses personal servant going to make him more jealous? This new person isn't going to make it harder for him to win her over are they? I hope not. Looking forward to reading more... |
| dreamercrys chapter 3 . 2/26/2009 Why doesn't he just tell her that she is his mate? And why is she so scared? He has been nothing but nice to her... Keep up the writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing... |