Reviews for Lament
fluff.flower chapter 9 . 7/9/2009
luv luv luv this story

it just seems so much more mature

n i jus luv it

keep it up
chazzybiatch chapter 9 . 7/9/2009

hm jaedo is certainly creepy dont you think,

I hope faerie still gets with alphonse :D

Sour Plums chapter 8 . 7/1/2009
Oh my god, I can't believe you did that! Do you know how perfect that "break up" scene was? I can't believe Faerie said that, and my heart wailed when Alphonse said "No, wait for me"

I'm sorry I haven't been reading much, FictionPress sort of left my mind, but I have a lot more time for it now!
step.softly chapter 8 . 6/24/2009
That was... so sad. So very sad and so very beautiful. Lovely chapter! A few typos, though... "A man who won't let any hard (harm?) come to you."
wolfprint chapter 6 . 6/5/2009
aww i love your stories so much!
GinzzzRoxxx chapter 6 . 6/4/2009
Grr. Alphonse. But I likez Jules! oh well, your story, after all.

Still cool though (lol)
GinzzzRoxxx chapter 5 . 5/25/2009
cottoncandylover11 chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
An update to this chapter is needed. Not just wanted, needed.
ValenXHart chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
o this was good. my favorite part was when glenn was talking to fae at the end of the night, "We cannot stay children forever, and you have seen too much to escape adulthood." that was some god cookin.

love the ending of the chapter, i think you have made the green man into some sort of i dont kno, rock starish, some girls are probably swooning at the mention of him.
Sour Plums chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
Wow, very good chapters! First Alphonse, and now the Green Man cliffhanger! Very very good! I'm loving it! I understand that it's time for school to end, and time for exams and such, but I hope you update again soon!
wolfprint chapter 5 . 5/10/2009
i love this!
chazzybiatch chapter 5 . 5/10/2009
Oh you devil! Dont cliffhanger argh

I love the update what took you so long?

I'm not sure if I like this new Alphonse or not.

This green man is certainly mysterious.

Please update I'm loving it

Sour Plums chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
"Innocent women, like my beautiful Victoria, should never be hurt." I found this line to be interesting, it seems as if by calling Victoria innocent, Faerie is seperating herself from her, kind of saying that SHE isn't innocent herself.

Wow, this is intriguing, how does Alphonse know the former Earl of Blackpool enough to fake being his son? God, you're so good at adding new story plots. I can see this story on bookshelves!

I wish Alphonse had seen her! I'm thinking that when he does, he will ignore her.

You know, I was wondering why you never reply to me. I'm pretty faithful to review, sometimes it seems they go underappreciated.
nvrwstabreath chapter 4 . 4/10/2009
I'm so in love with this story! Fantastic writing!
cottoncandylover11 chapter 4 . 4/9/2009
I was not expecting that. Please, please update, this is turinging out fantasticly
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