Reviews for kiwis
brittle hearts chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Amazing descriptions; it almost made me feel like I was really tasting the kiwi. The tongue-in-cheek message was also delivered very well.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This poem is very creative, cheeky, and witty. :P
lookingwest chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
haha, this is full of wit. i like it a lot.
xxoh-the-possibilitiesxx chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
i liked this because it was like the kiwis, bitter but sweet, and i really like that kind of poem, and writing in general.