|Reviews for Intrusive and Arrogant|
| roxceedel chapter 10 . 41m ago
No! It's over too fast! Please let me go to your page and the sequel be there...please be there! :)
| roxceedel chapter 9 . 1h ago
So much better! Loved it!
| roxceedel chapter 8 . 1h ago
I wanted Jack to feel the same as Evan...:(
| roxceedel chapter 6 . 2h ago
| roxceedel chapter 1 . 3h ago
Just getting started! Excited to see what's next! You go girl!
| miliee7 chapter 10 . 4/13
Wow... really ... wow ! It was exactly my type of story! So ... intense. I'm not even english but this story totally hooked me ! It was a fabulous story, thanks to have writed it for us!
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/16
Awesome story! Best brother x brother fic Ever!
| Macikxxx chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
| PennieBlossom chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
This story has surprised me quite a bit- I feel totally obsessed with your characters! I don't leave reviews all that often, but I really felt like you deserved to know how much I have enjoyed reading this! And might I say, you write a very good Lemon, some people fail miserably at them, but the scenes in this were incredibly steamy- so go you!
| dmnlt44 chapter 10 . 6/9/2013
This story was wonderful. It was sad, but it had a happy ending and I'm a sucker for a happy ending. You are a wonderful writer, and continue to write as much as possible!
| Originally Pristine chapter 10 . 6/7/2013
;_; I love this story.
| TheDarkPassenger chapter 10 . 6/6/2013
This was an awesome story! Evan is so in love with his little bro... It's actually really sweet. I can't wait to read the sequel and hope jack realizes just how much he loves Evan too, because right now he seems kind of confused.
| borderless chapter 5 . 1/10/2013
I don't like that Jack never seems to have a backbone and when he does Evan knocks him down a few more pegs. It's seriously frustrating that Jack has no control over situations what so ever and Evan doesn't even act like he loves Jack. Sure he lusts over him but he doesn't seem to care that he keeps hurting Jack time and time again while only acknowledging it for a second before doing it again. Jack is already the younger of the two siblings, has a people problem, anxiety attacks, and no previous sexual relationships. I think he's at enough of a disadvantage without Evan adding to it! I can't imagine them in an actual relationship without them being equals (that's how abusive relationships start! :P) I think you're writings fine and the whole concept had a lot of potential since brother/brother fics aren't very common but I just don't like the characters all that much but seeing the other reviews that might just be me so don't take any of this the wrong way! Just not my type of story is all.
| morningstorm70 chapter 10 . 1/4/2013
That was a great story could really feel the anxiety the emotion
| KissForARose chapter 10 . 12/31/2012
Do us girls have this weird thing that MxM pairings are the best ever? Coz i certainly do, and u know what? i fucking LOVE it! write that sequel NOW or i'll find ya. I'll hunt you down in the middle of the
night and slowly kill you whilst you sleep if you DO NOT write that damned sequel.