I just found thise story and its amazing. I just loved it. I realy hope you make a sequel.

Sequel please :D

Wow. Wow. Wow. This story was so beautiful. I could see a struggle in the beginning, but this chapter is the best scene I've ever read. It was so damn sensual that it was hard to get back to the math homework I should be doing. Jack and Evan's relationship and them as people (especially Jack) seemed so REAL. The personalities were unlike any I've ever seen. They were created flawlessly.

You are an amazing writer. The structure was... [pick your favorite adjective and put it here].

Spectacularly, fantastically, wonderfully crafted. (And I don't let complements this good out of my mouth (hands?) unless they are true.)

Keep writing.

i think you should do a descript of evan's control issues

he pretty much made it so that his brother can only love him

which is pretty dman awesome,if you dun mind me saying

though it does take into account the free will thingie

I was reading this in a place I couldn't review, so I came back to say I liked it and I'm adding it to my favorite list. That's all.

So hi again! Lol I'm your 100th reviewer! (I think) and I know how important that is because I just reached my 200th review :) but you did it with only ten chapters :) good job you are a really good writer and I'm enjoying this story even more as I continue to read it :)

I really like your story so far... Can't wait to see what happens next :)

um im going to apologizie because i feel lyk i missjudged yur work so yeah srry i didnt not get tha whole brother to brother untill a few days ago srry

um okay how do i start oh yeah loved the story and let me tell you this, i especially love evan... its wrong i know. at the same time i love how he is in contorl and just has a lot of issues and its jus makes him more attractive and thats bad... anyways with that being said i think the story would have been much more enjoyable if jack hada brother who had a friend who was evan and thts how they fell in love just like that idk i just think it wud have been easier to fall in love with how gud jack and evan are for each other but right now it makes feel lyk dang i love it but at the same time its wrong lol. i guess what im trying to say is that i wanna fall in love with the story and not feel bad about loving the story {idk it sounded bette in my head lol} idk if it makes sense.. but serious this is a gud story and you dont have to change it, its my opinion on the sitution so other than that keep it up

I honestly have to say. This story is the only one that pulled much of anything in the way of 'emotions' from me. This chapter in particular. Jack... he reminds me so much of my self it's like a looking into a mirror... and the circumstances.. the whole story feels like i'm reading my life back to me. Especially in this chapter, chapter six, at the end. Sadly... I said the exact same words to my sister once "Don't kill me." That one simple sentence and I literally had a breakdown, I could hear myself screaming it. everything rushed back like a wave or dreadful memories. But I"m not telling you this to make you sad or upset, I just wanted to express how heartfelt this was for me and how expertly you write your stories. I'm very glad that you didn't just leave this as a one-shot story. Also, sorry for the wall of text.

That was the most realistic and therefore enjoyable approach to incest ever! The character relationships are pretty great too- Liz was central but the focus of the story was still Evan and Jack so yay :] loved it.

I love your story. I love the build up that comes between the brothers. I really like how you portrayed Jack's dilemma and underlying inferiority and need for affection from his brother. I kind of like that you only gave glimpses of Evan's POV in the story-it makes him more mysterious and enchanting, just the way Jack sees him. I hope you write a sequel of this someday. I really would like to see where their relationship would take off. Will Liz know about it? How about their mother who's constantly away?

I love you story

This story deserves a sequel

Make asequel please. I loved it how they both hated each other and now they can't be without each other. This truly needs a sequel