| Reviews for Intrusive and Arrogant |
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  calamity jane chapter 4 . 3/5/2009 Awesome update! Hooray for Jack being able to control his panic attacks a little and actually accept a ride from Evan. It's too bad he was beaten up, but Evan kissing his "boo boos" made up for it. I can't wait for the next update! I don't think you need to worry about a beta. You do a terrific job and I've only noticed a few mistakes. :) |
 xSadistxFujix chapter 4 . 3/5/2009 I liked it! Especially that last part! Of course. Great chapter! |
| ricemidget chapter 3 . 3/3/2009 Whoa~~ enjoying the story a lot! keep it up and I can't wait to read the next chapter(s) 3 |
| BelieveIt chapter 3 . 3/3/2009 Hey another good chapter, i love the characters. Cant wait to see more :) |
| calamity jane chapter 3 . 3/3/2009 That was an awesome update! Thanks so much for Evan's pov...I luvd it...it helps me to understand him a little more. Poor Jack, what will he do now! Again you did a terrific job and I hope you continue to include Evan's pov. |
| xSadistxFujix chapter 3 . 3/3/2009 I LOVED this chapter. And in Evan's pov I like how you state that he wants something but not what. I loved it and look forward to the next chapter! |
| calamity jane chapter 2 . 3/2/2009 Yay for the quick update! Thank goodness Jack has Liz, huh. Looking forward to finding out what happens next. Keep up the good work! :) |
| BelieveIt chapter 2 . 3/2/2009 Hey another good chapter . Im curious about what Evans feeling and everything, cant wait to see more. |
| xSadistxFujix chapter 2 . 3/1/2009 Cool, a chapter so soon after I read the first one. A chapter from Evan's pov sounds cool. Can't wait for the next one! |
| xSadistxFujix chapter 1 . 3/1/2009 So far I really like it and look forward to reading more! |
| BelieveIt chapter 1 . 2/27/2009 Hey good start, Cant wait to see more . |
| calamity jane chapter 1 . 2/27/2009 You got to feel bad for Jack and how he panics around people...poor guy. You're very good at drawing the reader in and getting the reader to "feel" Jack's emotions. Do you plan on writing from Evan's viewpoint at all? I think it would be interesting to know what he thinks of the whole situation. I am def interested in reading more and look forward to your next update. |
| ricemidget chapter 1 . 2/26/2009 story reads great so far! can't wait for future chapters ] |
| B.T.A chapter 1 . 2/26/2009 Great story! Keep up the good work! |
| fynnagin chapter 1 . 2/26/2009 This story is cute so far - I like Jack's personality n_n |