Evan is a very very smart guy

The last line though lol

I fucking hate Evan. He claims to love Jack but he doesn't. I was really hoping the epilogue would be of Jack in the future with another guy.

But nevertheless, a really well written and enjoyable story!

Emotional abuse leaves deeper scars than physical abuse. When confronted with both many but not all turn to suicide unless they have support, ie. someone who takes their condition seriously.

I have two anxiety disorders, one of which is Social Anxiety disorder. I also dislike bullies. So it's a little early to say.

She may be just trying to help but Liz is being a bit of a b!tch. She is not even taking his condition and the fact he has a legitimate reason to be scared into account when she is telling him he is being 'stupid' for being worried and scared!

Evan is the most selfish lover I ever read about. He obiously only care about his pleasure and doesn't give a damn about Jack's or if he's hurting him. Well, he's completely selfish as a person to beginning with. I don't think he truly loves Jack; but only really really wants him (as a possession). You would care if the person you love was hurt (mentally or physically) and yet he has not shown this kind of concern once so far.
Honestly this relationship is totally messed up, and I'm not talking about the fact that they're brothers (cause I don't care).
The writing is good though.

This story is amazing! I like it very much. I'm a little confuse about the ending though, why does he felt like vomiting when he entered Liz's house?

This story doesn't need a re-write. It needs a SEQUEL ALREADY! Please, please, please! Post up the next story for this one. I would like to read it before I die. So please - it's my favorite story. And it's the only one I can truly relate to.

Best story ever! love it! I just has stumble upon this story and the only thing I can say is wow! Believe me that this is quality reading (I have been reading every day for 10 year) Not many story have manage to impress me this much. Really Hope u continue with a sequel

Okay this story is awesome, sequel plz.

What happened to the sequel? Even though it's bad to read this stuff because they were doing grown up stuff I REALLY WANNA READ MORE

I feel guilty for liking this story. Lmao thanks for sharing

Liked the story. It was nice.

Somehow, I don't think Jack will be nice and kiss back. That'd be too easy.