Reviews for she don't like me
Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Nice rhyming. It goes really well with the poem. It must take a long time to write over 200 items. Please read and review my stuff. the more reviews the better.
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
the first two lines remind me of an old rock song.

i like the contrast,

and the repetition of the "bees" thing.

i've never read anything like this.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
"She likes the bees." The implications here are so beautiful and sad.