|Reviews for Strong Woman|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Wow. That's really interesting.
The only thing is, I think it ended a little strangely...
Keep up the great work! :) (:
| RentBoheme chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
I like this. You are a good writer, but I just have a few constructive criticisms:
1) When her mother dies, I'd expect the main character to be very guilty. Hadn't the main character just said that her mother wasn't allowed to die? This, I'd think would be followed by guilt.
2) The story seems to just end at a random spot. I didn't feel like there was much closure to the short story.
3) Also, I wondered what you meant when you said "Jeff, kids, Jeff" when Uncle Grayson was first introduced
Other than that, I enjoyed this. :)