|Reviews for Wingless bird|
| Skarlet P. Rhapsody chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Right!... Hehe!... ;)...
I LOVE the last stanza the most!... "We just love the darkness 'cause we see nothing, we feel everything... We're blind in this painless world."...
It's so perfect in its simplicity!... D
| Green Gummy Bear chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
"That's deep man!" - Who knows who said that...
Kinda depressing in a good way that makes you think about it late into the night only to finale realize what it truly means at 1 am while humming show tunes under you covers. Yea... don't question the methods! :P
Great poem though!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Phrasing here is awkward "if I have no one wing."... "if I don't have a wing" sounds better. Same thing in the second stanza. Also, in the second stanza I don't get why you couldn't tun without a wing...
I did like the idea here. It was really interesting and I think the third stanza was especially great.
| Sakura Reyna chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
OMG I love written things about birds...I liked your line, " We just love the darkness 'cause we see nothing, we feel everything...we're blind in this painless world," Gorgeous line and you put the way I see certain things in this world. Thanks so much for review on "One Day."
| Isca chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
"We go on." Good message.
"We're blind in this painless world." Profound.
| lael1bologna chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
But when the rain falls.../We fall too...Like that angel. — Amazing. I love your newest work. It is truly amazing! *lael1bologna*
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Again very strong images!
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
I liked it! It was very beautiful and expresive!