Oh my god! I love this story! I read this years ago and I loved it! I had to read it again! This is amazing, I would love to read a sequel! Such a good story, thank you!

Please excuse me while I collapse into a giant heaping pile of woman-goo.

:)

Poseidon. AH Poseidon. Always my favorite greek god. This is so awesome! A terrific story!

There are a few spelling errors in the early chapters (1-20) but it's mostly small things like a letter being left off the end of a word. Like swimming quickl, instead of swimming quickly. It's probably a fictionpress error. But this is an amazing story! GYAH!

This was such a great read. I absolutely love Poseidon. He is fucking gorgeous. And I also adore Hali's character. She isn't some typical modest bitch who secretly has a backbone; the one you find in a lot of stories. This was not the most well-written story, but it was most definitely worth the read. Whenever I hear about Poseidon, I'm bound to think of this.

Thank you for sharing such a fantastic story. I loved every bit of it.

Cheers,

~xkcbby

Loved this story so much, I have always been fascinated by Greek mythology so this story really held my interest!

:D Good work.

It was the best story I have ever read! But is hali now a god?

You should get a lot of reviews for this story. It is awesome! Poseiden is such a hottie. :)

Yay! I was so happy to see that the was posted on Fiction press. I was a big fan of this story when it was up on Quizilla. I was following it from beginning to end, so it makes really happy to see it here

You don't know how much I appreciate a good Greek god story that doesn't involve Hades and Persephone. ;)

It was a wonderful story; I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for sharing!

This story was awesome! I really liked how it was in different character's point of views.

Wow, Edward Cullen may look like a greek god, but Poseidon really is one! I love this story, and I think it should get more reviews. Maybe you should enable the anonymous review feature. Also, if you could put a break inbetween points of veiw, it would be easier to understand.

this is so sweet, i love this!

I am stunned.. the entire book was perfect.

Aw. This is so cute!

what a woundeful story i was at the end of my seat the whole time,

I really liked how you implemented a whole bunch of greek mythology in the story. It added a whole new level to it. You should read Percy Jackson and the Olympians by Rick Riordan. It's really good, probably one of the best books I have ever read. Anyways I was just wondering about Poseidon's hair color. I was under the impression that his hair was black. Do you know if his hair was black or blond? Anyways it was a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed it :)