Reviews for hiding perfection
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
the flow was perfect,

and the last stanza was mind-blowing!
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
hm. I like this, but the line 'Striving to be divine dying to find the imagine' confuses me a litte. i'm not quite sure what you're trying to emphasize there.