Oh, the cute. Also, I'm totally reading everything out of order, hah.

"Use your bus scream, Sineka!" that was definitely (or probably) the best part of this piece, haah.

Although, I must say, that the transition from Sin being upset over what he did to her and confiding in her friend that she wasn't really angry at him for that, just protecting him, was kind of abrupt. But this is a fictional piece, and it's still cute, so whatever. :D

Aw adorable! Yes, not realistic, but cute nevertheless. :)

Congrats to you and your fiancé! I wish you both happiness!

Aw this is just as cute as Seeking Dreams. It was funny when Leo said hi to her from between two girls, I can totally picture some guy loving life in that position. Emily and Jessica were a riot, fighting and then agreeing and then fighting because they agreed. Alec was a sweetheart and, though not as first, Sin was a a nice character. I'm glad they got their happy ending.

Cute story! Congratulations on the engagement!

-Aria

aww what a cute story :)

Congratulations on your engagement! hope everything works out perfectly for you :D

I liked it. Typical happy theme, but somehow original :D I'm a sucker for the original stuff.

And ohmygoodness, congratulations on getting engaged! I don't know you, but still. Haha, I wish you lots of luck- in writing more stories and in life :)

Aww, what a cute story :)

I like the bus-encounter idea :D

And CONGRATULATIONS! :D I hope you'll be happy together for a lo~ng time (sappy as that sounds, heehee) !

Now sleepy-time. It's almost half past ten here, and I have school tomorrow~ Ah, I don't want to~ I'm tired~ I want more vacation~

Hm. Anyway. Please don't mind the last part. I just felt like whining for a bit xD

Sorries :P

*Dorky grin* Good story, and HAPPY ENGAGEMENT! Haha, I'm absolutely insane. Oh well. :)

Congrats on the engagement!

I think the story is really cute and a series would be awsome! It doesn't matter if they aren't realistic because thats usually why people like stories - because they let you hope for things seen as impossible.

Hope your brother wasn't too shocked :)

Another awsome piece - keep writing!-

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It is unrealistic, but you admitted that, so I'll move on. It's very fluffy and cute and sweet, and Emily and Jessica are very entertaining. Kudos to artistic dreamer for adding this to our c2. (:

congrats on your engagement! tell me how he proposed! i love listening to people's engagement stories because there so romantic and cute! lol

this is such a beautiful story, although i agree that it isn't very realistic, but the whole story is just too cute and fluffy! i love the way that sineka would rather give up alec than have him live in poverty and alec would rather have her than money. just too cute! :D i'm looking forward to more bus stories :D keep writing more!

That was so cute! I love the fluffy stories:) I think that a 'Bus' series would be cool, I think that you should do it. It would be very interesting to see where you would go with it.

OMG -SQUEAL-! you lucky girl! :D no wonder your oneshots are so adorable! and this one is just as adorable as the other ones! :D

-toffeecakesxox. :)

SO CUTE! Congratulations on your engagement! And it could be realistic... my uncle married my aunt when she was 17. anyway I totally loved this one shot! and her way of accepting was just so bloody awsome!

Great story! So cute. - Congratulations on your engagement! Nikki x x