Reviews for OneWord
Subbie chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
I like this one. :)
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 9 . 12/29/2009
I feel a lot of anger in this piece... what's up?
Isca chapter 6 . 12/26/2009
This is piece is very vibrant and fascinating; it's almost like an introspective spiritual experience. Cool.
Isca chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
I love the tone of this entry; there's something very moving, powerful, and angsty about it that really captivates the reader. :)
Skyward Ending chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I LOVE the shape of this poem and the repetition of "down" with increased spacing. It is amazing how you did this in only a minute. I also liked that you used an unconventional way of measuring fear - installations. Very nice.
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
...who you waiting for?
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 4 . 12/8/2009
that's so sweet of you. XD
i think that maybe chapter 4 . 12/5/2009
haven't read your blog so can't say i know the backstory but as a write alone- the emotion here, frustrations&longing here, straight-up palatable.
i think that maybe chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
(i ment to mention this with the last one as well- i like how what you write doesn't stick to the promptword. interpretation, i like it.)

the feeling- yeah. been there. am there.

the wording- again, i like how you structure and play.

and your endings are always stellar.
i think that maybe chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
"three goddamn seconds"

the oomph/wow/power/angst right there? just, oh! :D
i think that maybe chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
(i love oneword!)

and i digg this.

your formatting- down- was exceptionally rad.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
"She can feel alive again." The angst present in this line is amazing! :)
Jennifer chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
It's like your my conscious who finally found a way to write down everything that i feel that i've never been able to put in words. i love it. all, except my best friend, don't care about me, and they never return the kindness that i give them. blegh.
Jennifer chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
i like it a lot. ]
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
good pieces. keep it up!