Reviews for OneWord |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this one. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel a lot of anger in this piece... what's up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is piece is very vibrant and fascinating; it's almost like an introspective spiritual experience. Cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the tone of this entry; there's something very moving, powerful, and angsty about it that really captivates the reader. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE the shape of this poem and the repetition of "down" with increased spacing. It is amazing how you did this in only a minute. I also liked that you used an unconventional way of measuring fear - installations. Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...who you waiting for? |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's so sweet of you. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() haven't read your blog so can't say i know the backstory but as a write alone- the emotion here, frustrations&longing here, straight-up palatable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (i ment to mention this with the last one as well- i like how what you write doesn't stick to the promptword. interpretation, i like it.) the feeling- yeah. been there. am there. the wording- again, i like how you structure and play. and your endings are always stellar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "three goddamn seconds" the oomph/wow/power/angst right there? just, oh! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() (i love oneword!) and i digg this. your formatting- down- was exceptionally rad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "She can feel alive again." The angst present in this line is amazing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's like your my conscious who finally found a way to write down everything that i feel that i've never been able to put in words. i love it. all, except my best friend, don't care about me, and they never return the kindness that i give them. blegh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it a lot. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() good pieces. keep it up! Faith |