I like this one. :)

I feel a lot of anger in this piece... what's up?

This is piece is very vibrant and fascinating; it's almost like an introspective spiritual experience. Cool.

I love the tone of this entry; there's something very moving, powerful, and angsty about it that really captivates the reader. :)

I LOVE the shape of this poem and the repetition of "down" with increased spacing. It is amazing how you did this in only a minute. I also liked that you used an unconventional way of measuring fear - installations. Very nice.

...who you waiting for?

that's so sweet of you. XD

haven't read your blog so can't say i know the backstory but as a write alone- the emotion here, frustrations&longing here, straight-up palatable.

(i ment to mention this with the last one as well- i like how what you write doesn't stick to the promptword. interpretation, i like it.)

the feeling- yeah. been there. am there.

the wording- again, i like how you structure and play.

and your endings are always stellar.

"three goddamn seconds"

the oomph/wow/power/angst right there? just, oh! :D

(i love oneword!)

and i digg this.

your formatting- down- was exceptionally rad.

"She can feel alive again." The angst present in this line is amazing! :)

It's like your my conscious who finally found a way to write down everything that i feel that i've never been able to put in words. i love it. all, except my best friend, don't care about me, and they never return the kindness that i give them. blegh.

i like it a lot. ]

good pieces. keep it up!

Faith