|Reviews for Wildfire|
| Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Nice diction throughout, especially "pandemic."
"It is a rumour of hope." Powerful final line! :)
| Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
(EF review for RG)
Alrighty, I'm not a big fan of the double-space center block stanza. Sure, it adds simplicity, but it just seems bland. I'm sure you could spice up the form. _
I like your comparison. Hope, wildfires, and diseases -it's weird put together like that, but it gave some interesting imagery, so that was nice.
And little things you did with the format on words like "quicker" and "pandemic" was a good touch. It brought emphasis to what you were wanted.
Overall, I liked it! Not crazy on the form, but that's okay ;D