|Reviews for On Going Unnoticed|
| Myst C chapter 10 . 2/28/2011
love the story hes a jerk still and i love her anger issues..haha update soon
| Myst C chapter 7 . 2/28/2011
i laughed so much in this chapter it was weird and funny. i loved it and gabe is a big jerk i hate him but i want him to worship her at the end lol. now im off to read more...
| Myst C chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
i read your story about sid and i loved it so much your writing is awesome so i decided to read more of your stories and you did not dissapoint me! i really like it so far its his journal right thats why he was trying to supposedly carry her bag. funny she forgot her name i did too though and hes important to the story obviously. lol now im off to read more!
| U MadeMyLifeComplete chapter 10 . 2/7/2011
I love it can't wait to hear more !
| lraezolts chapter 10 . 2/6/2011
Oh no! It's over! Update soon please! I absolutely love this story too!
| 64ShatteredButterflys chapter 10 . 11/14/2010
this is really damn bad!
just kidding I luv this story It's like one of the best storys I have ever read keep writing please!
luv this story
| xNight chapter 3 . 8/10/2010
This thing gave me a writers block.. Not that I had begun to write something though..
I thought it was pretty cool at first, but I think I'll quit reading at this point(chapter 3).
My personal, non-objective opinion:
Sylvia makes me feel a bit sick. I don't get it, how can she take those guys being so mean to her? Personally, I would've just got offended.. Which leaves me out of the story; meaning, usually I feel like the main character of the book I'm reading, but Sylvia is just wayy too different from me.
It's also strange how her name changes. One moment she's Sylvia, the other - Silvia. Which is it then?
Oh, and the part where you put Gabe telling the story... Somehow, it doesn't feel quite right. It is more boyish than the parts with Sylvia, but it still doesn't feel like a junior boy. Then again, real good for the 1st time :)
Keep up the good work.
| lil and tiny chapter 8 . 12/18/2009
Hoorah!Pumpkin's alive :D I love dogs (and would be upset if...yeah D:)
He barely avoided being caught as the writer this time XD Almost!
| Allie R chapter 7 . 10/10/2009
Yup, this chapter pretty much made my day. Poor Pumpkin .
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 6 . 10/3/2009
wahoo your back!
| Allie R chapter 4 . 7/11/2009
OMG OMG OMG! I absoluelt ylove Sylvia. Embaressingly enough, when I showed my friend this story she told me that you could have been describing me. . Oh well, but really I love this story. Update soon missy!
| Has A WaywithWords chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
I like this story, it seems pretty interesting. Plus, I love Silly because shes easy to relate to and a lot like me! Free People and Anthro are some of my favourite stores along with Lucky Brand and Urban Outfitters. Simone and Silly could be good friends if she wasn't siding with Gabe.
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
thankies for calling me adorable
lovelovelove the update
cant wait for more
you better update soon
and what was the thing written on the board
you never said
| Zenia chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
simones a fucking bitch
cant wait for more
hope you update soon
p.s. *does the update dance*