Nice story, but the grammar. It's like a first grader writing a full length novel. Absolute disaster, if only your grammar was better.

Honestly, I loved this story but i absolutly LOATHE Will... To me he seems like one of those horrible controlling almost abusive men who trap their wives, lulling them into a false sense of happiness. I think Sophie had it right when she almost left him. Although I'm personally a very independant person so it might just be my fears of being in a relationship like that ;D anyways great stoy, I will check out the sequel!

Oh wow, this is really good, I can't stop reading. D

I really enjoyed reading this story. I can't wait to start reading the sequel.

~Ashley

oh my gosh that is like one of the best things ive read in forever and i read alot... you are amazing at discribing the little detals... and i could realy picyure exactly what was going on in my head throught the etire story... very very well done...

i loved it :D

i just have to review this chapter because it made me smile so much. i have something so much in common with it. my best friend's name is Will. the chick Sophie in this story's last name is Harris and it's the same as my best friend Will's has name. His real name is Robert but we call him will because it's his middle name and he prefer's that. haha. and i have the biggest crush on him and he knows and he doesn't want to like me that way. he's hurting me everyday, but he's still my best friend. and i just thought it was funny that the names in this story are so familiar to me. tehe.

sorry, lol.

-ashley

I loved this! What a great ending.

Oh, at the beginning, you called Zoe Sophie.

you r a very awsome writer and i would like to see a sequel. please! thank u.

This story was fantastic, and I can't believe I've managed to stick with reviewing every chapter! It's amazing to think already its been 20 chapters! Okay, well, can I be a bit cheeky? And ask if you would put up a note in this story to tell us that when the sequel is up, because i just really dont want to miss it! Hope you'll update that story soon!

post the sequel!

Please.

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...you should put the link on here when you do...

D.

Aww, what a sickly sweet chapter! I feel like I've just swallowed lots of flowers and 'hopes & Dreams!' *giggles* okay, yeah, enough of that P Another fantastic chapter, and im sad to see its nearly the end of this one ... but I'm waiting for the sequel! UPDATE soon please!

“This isn’t an ending. it’s a happy beginning.”

Probably my favorite line in the entire thing.

Anothe rfabulous chapter, and I love the name Zoe! Its so cute! Oh, and is that whole six weeks thing o stop them from doing a 'certain thing' because the fertility rate goes higher after having a baby? I only know thatm because my next to next door neighbour oce had a baby (this was years ago, like i was one, but my mum told me!) and the lady had just had a baby, and she was now pregnant with the next! Later on , those two boys became my partners in crime, haha! Okay, well, UPDATE again soon please!

“Keep holding on, you’ll make it through. Just stay strong, I’m here for you.”

you know those are song lyrics, right?

And I loved this chapter.