i think you should get bored in spanish more often , this is freaking amazing ,... i adore it .

haha nice

its got an amazing flow

and your writing seems artistic...ly beautiful

well, at least you spend spanish class

...slightly productivly :D

no worries

i write during math

Cheers,

Evanescence147

omg...this is wounderfull keep writting its very good

This was a really nice piece. The narration in it was great and the way that it rhymed was interesting. I liked how it told a story in a beckoning sort of way.

C.S.

I have been waiting for something new to read... And I's got somesin! Suh-wet. Very nice, for being written in a very boring class, anyway...

eerie. good job on the rhyming.

keep writing