Reviews for New Kid
Isca chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Wow, this poem is so creative and unique. I liked the format, the tone, how relatable it was, everything about it, really. :)
october lies chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I like the general feel of this poem. It's very very open and friendly - most of the time, poems aren't either of them. To me, it seems as if there's no pattern (so to speak) for the different lines. Are they meant to emphasize anything, or did you press the enter button where you thought it would look/sound best? Regardless, something about that throws me off - it seems as if it's random and without thoughtful pattern. Otherwise, I definitely like this quite a bit! It's so lighthearted and makes me wish things were this way again, like in kindergarten and such.
Acelin chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Aw. thats cute.
Glass Clown chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
aw, quite sweet!