Reviews for Shift
Silver chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
aww Im kinda sad that this story is ending. ever think about making just a romance sequel you know dealing with the brothers. like Hayden could find a girl who just moved into town running away from something, stalker or whatever? really good so far gonna be sad when it sends *tear*
Pink5288 chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
angie chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
i hope you try to do a medical (like er) story next.i love
angie chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
good chapter can't wait to see what happens date soon
Maelys chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
The suspense is increasing!
Nollie Marie chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
o seriously? almost finish? Seriously? Normally you like...finish in the high 20 something chapters and in a few days, one update a day would be like barely 20!

ps- eh it was okay XD lol
Death's Sweet Kiss chapter 13 . 3/24/2009
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. Too bad you didn't have it published before "Twilight" and everything! I certainly think this story is better than that one... I'm so tired of the vampire stories and everything, there aren't enough stories out there about shifters and such.

You can pretty much only find them online and half the time they are decent storylines with horrible grammar and writing styles. So kudos for you! I look forward to reading more of this story.
Haley Hardcore chapter 13 . 3/23/2009
nifty chapter cant wait till the next one
AbbeyEileen chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
I want to think Alex is the good guy, but Ben just makes me want to scream. Can't a girl fall in love with the wrong guy once in a while- in this case, Alex, if he really is the "bad" guy?

Even though he's not and Ben is just jealous and stirring up trouble and shit...
ShrimpoJewels chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
She didn't tell Alex about the kiss? Hmm I guess she doesn't want Ben to be killed or something along those lines lol
Sam chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
great story!

althouhg I think that you move the relationship along a little fast in the beginning and her temper
Jen chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
I'm not a good reviewer, and I usually don't, but rest assured I read every chapter.

Anyways, I was reading my local paper this week and there was this article that reminded me of Shift.

book.babe15 chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
great chapter as usual but i don't like ben putting those stupid doubts in her head! and im excited for a new baseball story, i love baseball!
Nollie Marie chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
LMAO are ur ears burning? Because I was talking about you to one of my friends who's moving back to Quad City (some city near Chicago, u may know it). If I visit her this summer I'll have to come and visit you.

ps- loved it.
CaughtInASimpleGame chapter 12 . 3/20/2009
I can review from my BlackBerry again! Anyway, I am really getting into this - even if I want to smack that Devin kid in the face. Update soon!


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