Reviews for Shift |
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![]() ![]() more:) update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah, he's stalking her house, the whole thing is just creepy. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story so far and great characters cant wait till the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of losing steam... I like Mya and Alex together, but I know something big is going to threaten them, and I don't want that to happen. But i want them to put Devin away. He's a creeper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eek that stuff creeps me out...seeing people at my window at night. One of my greatest fears is looking out my window and seeing a face in it looking directly in...lol that's kind of what the Devin scene reminded me of except he was downstairs instead of right next to the window. Thank goodness for second floors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it now get on YIM! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "...if something happened and I got pregnant…” WHOA! Whoa. Slow down there, Mya. lol. I seriously thought that remark was leading somewhere else. Oh! HE KNOWS. Well, Sh*t! Grr. "I certainly hope to see them camping soon. I can just imagine the fun!" Yeah, because being torn apart by a cougar is loads of FUN! “It wouldn’t dare attack if there are a group of us,” Yeah, right! Dumbass. ahaha. j/k. But seriously, if Blake wants to go camping with a cougar who are we to stop him? :P. Just don't call us when said cougar is tearing your face off. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eurgh, Daven gives me the creeps too, such an arsehole. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Suspenseful...can't wait to see what happens next. Are you going to post pictures for this story on your website? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww mya and alex are so adorablee! and devin's a big creep! can't wait for the next update! today maybe? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. So Devin is related to Ben somehow, like a weird mutant distant cousin. And Ben is trying to help Devin kill Alex & Hayden & Ethan b/c of some stupid grudge. Or something like that. Lol i'm kind of burned out on theories. Yay for Eve! And Blake! I know after this story you probably won't want to start another series, but if we could see Hayden a little more... well, that would be very awesome. He's amusing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Continue! ] |
![]() ![]() its getting better and better well soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why that sick prick! Has Devlin been watching Mya and Alex get chummy? |
![]() ![]() Danger! Danger! lol I love it. And what is it with your heros being so hunky wonderful! ps- I reread Phone calls last night on the train and if I could have reviewed I would have a lot to say Xd |