Reviews for Shift
In Love With Your Love chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
oh. I love this chapter. & was it just me or was a bit longer than usual? Well, anyway... um.

aha! THIS... “Maybe he’s an alcoholic,” I laughed so hard. Seriously I couldn't stop laughing.

"The cat slowed and it appeared as if he was laughing." Son of a B*tch! That little... I shake my fist at him! Why is he stalking her? Does he know that she knows? Does he know that she's dating a shapeshifter so he's like... taunting her... them? lol. I seriously have no idea. Not cool. :P

“You’re hurting me now by talking too much,” ahahahaha. FUNNY!

I forgot to mention this before in one of the reviews... What was up with the picture of Mya that Alex had in his room? She didn't ask him! & I wanted to know. :P Does it come up again?
In Love With Your Love chapter 9 . 3/15/2009
ahah. This chapter was great! I wanted to cry when they fought and was so happy when he came back! yay! & actually, I got kind of mad at Alex too. ahahah. “So you figured he could protect you better than me.” *rolls eyes* Men. lol.

Oh! There was a line in here... Eve giggled as her cheeks darkened. “So when’s that happen?”

Should it say "So when's that happening?"

Thought I'd point it out just in case you hadn't noticed it.
In Love With Your Love chapter 8 . 3/15/2009
heh. Mya was kind of scary with all her craziness. It was understandable though. I know I would've been a hundred times worse and it probably would have taken me a bit longer to accept everything. lol.

"...Blake Porter, the love of my best friend’s life, shifted into a dog. Now that would be hilarious." ahahaha. Yeah, that would be hilariou- WAIT... What are you trying to say?

“Standing by the hardware store. Do you want me to come up or would you rather talk on the phone?” No, silly. You're standing right outside my door. We'll just talk on the phone. :P

“You just hung up on me,” he grinned. AAW. How adorable.
Pink5288 chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
flowersinfall chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
Very interesting, I really like this story but sometimes I can't understand some aspects of Mya's character. She seems really independent in the beginning and seems to be able to hold her own but when she and Alex start their relationship she starts becoming kind of helpless. I understand she is really scared of the situation and feel safe when he is around but the way she goes about it makes her seem very needy and different from herself in the beginning. I really like what you're doing though, this story is one of my favorites!
Lucy-the-bookworm chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
I like it, yes it's different than your normal stuff but still good.
book.babe15 chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
as usual i loved it!
AbbeyEileen chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
Ben is the cougar, and he's trying to frame Alex because he's a dirty rotten bastard.

Or not. I'm kind of burned out on theories right now lol.

Can we see more Eve? Maybe with her boyfriend-who-won't-propose?
kaw97 chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
I don't think I have reviewed for a couple of chapters. Anyway, I really like this story. It is so different from anything I've read before - and it is very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens.
magllena chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
I like this story! I just recently started got back to reading your stuff :)
Jezebel Montgomery chapter 10 . 3/15/2009

So I am really enjoying it. It's different and unexpected but I think it's mostly getting past the expectations some of us expect from you that makes me read it slightly more critically than usual. I do like it though and you've done a really good job keeping the backstory and information consistent and believable. You really thought it through. I noticed that some of the reviews in earlier chapters mention that the romance seems abrupt or too fast. I agree it's fast, but I also know that you've covered that base and sometimes relationships skip steps if the chemistry is right. I think the only thing I find slightly off or unbalanced is that they never really argue over each other. There are misunderstandings, but they get over it really fast and just move on. It might be helpful that if you're not ready to step up the pace of the story, a bump in the plot would be something that allows their relationship to develope further on a psychological level.
Nollie Marie chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
yo you're writing sucks...

okay yeah I have no mean bone in my freakin body X( lol anyways, it was cool. I loved it. I'm surprise that's all you wrote about, Nickelback I mean. I thought you at least give them more than like two sentences.
SaraMarieIsOMFG chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
bahaha, i love how all your female characters in all your stories always wear their boyfriend's clothes. its like a trademark.

i'm falling for alex. but then, i've always been an animal lover x]
kris89 chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
great job! update soon. chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
I ADORE this story; I don't know how anybody couldn't. (: PMS! more soon!
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