Reviews for Shift
ShrimpoJewels chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
I personally like the story, though I admit it's not one of my favorites, I still think Phone Calls takes the cake for that one...but it's different and it's something I'm not use to reading and it's mainly because you're the author that I'm reading it. So I guess in a way I thank you :)

Anyway I enjoyed the chapter, update soon
skimmboardergurl chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
Another great chapter! I'm able to picture everything in my head, as if it was on a movie or television screen. I looked to see what people were saying after the "I don't want to offend you part," and I have to say that I disagree with them. I think the romance between Mya and Alex is developing at a fine rate...especially considering the circumstances. Extreme circumstances, adrenaline, and sharing those things with someone else helps two people form a bond-an intense bond. So I think it is just fine. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can. I must check my email twenty times a day to see if a new chapter alert came in. :-)
Jevanminx chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
That rogue chasing her car had me as jumpy as she was, hehehe. I think the scene with her and Alex fitted well there also. Oh maybe he does have a den in the next county.

kris89 chapter 7 . 3/15/2009
luv how they handled that situation. im still in aww of how everything youve written is completely believable. every single conversation, every reaction...nothing is exaggerated or out of place. great job and after youre done with this you should think about trying to publish it.
kris89 chapter 4 . 3/15/2009
angie chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
i like this story well update quicker if you
kris89 chapter 3 . 3/15/2009
so far ur doing awesome. i LUV how you showed ur audience alexs personality instead of just giving a long paragraph of his virtues like some of the people who put their stuff on fictionpress do. keep up the good work.
caw122182 chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to read more of it.
kris89 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
well im hooked. good job.
Meg chapter 10 . 3/14/2009
I was wondering what kinds of things people were saying after the "I don't want to offend you but.." so I looked over some of your reviews. Mostly I go that the romance wasn't believable. I suppose that it seemed kind of abrupt and out of no where. However, you did kind of start in the middle of their story (aka you skipped most of the pining for each other part). Perhaps you could do flashbacks- like maybe of when she first realized she liked him.. or even when she first took notice of him. I know that you said that she didn't realize she liked/loved him until he started paying attention to her after the cougar incident but normally people can realize when something like that started once they know they like the person. (Sorry if my rambling confused you.)

However, since the rest of the story is so amazing, I find that this isn't a big deal to me. I love your story! I'm so glad I found it.
becxfok01 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Cute story as usual. I like how you're branching out into other genres -makes the romance more interesting.

Just one thing though (and please don't be insulted), I don't think the couple in the story are very believable. In the story, they seem to randomly fall in love and it seemed to happen in a few days with no explanation. This makes it hard for readers to feel the chemistry or really want them to be together.
Pink5288 chapter 9 . 3/13/2009
I loove this story! It's one of my new favorites! Can't wait to read more! ]
tessahawthorne chapter 9 . 3/13/2009
You are amazing! Seriously I've read all of your stories and there hasn't been one I haven't loved :)

This supernatural one is awesome! And I love your characters! More updates please :)
Manga Girl Lover chapter 9 . 3/13/2009
tehe that's a long, fantastical, quick update but I loved it all! o it totally sounds as if this Devin guy is their cougar! man oh man I can't wait to see what happens next!
SaraMarieIsOMFG chapter 9 . 3/12/2009
i was a little hesitant about this story at first, since i don't read supernaturals much.

but of course that was silly. honestly, i should've known it would be this good since its written by you.

i got bored in study hall just now and figured i'd give it a shot and...yeah that's pretty much it. i loves it as usual haha.

nice job :)
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