Reviews for Shift |
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![]() ![]() I am really sad that there is no update yet. Throws off my whole day. Used to getting to work, checking the new chapter, then making it through the rest of the day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this is a cute story, and I like how it's a shapeshifter story, but not a werewolf one. Not that those are bad, just a bit overdone nowadays. Anyway, you ought to keep updating. [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter; the only thing slightly negative i have to say though (not in a mean way, love all your work) is that the main characters romance doesn't seem believeable. I just don't see the spark between the two characters like i have in some of your past romances. This could be just due to the story only being in the beginning stages so i can understand. Also, if he's liked her for so many years what took him so long to approach her? And how did he know he liked her when she said in earlier chapters that their interaction was limited to a handful of occasions? Sorry, i don't mean to be critical in the least, i love the story but there is just something missing. Perhaps my questions will be answered in later chapters. Anyway, great update (as usual) and i look forward to reading your next installment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I totally agree with what Eve said, about the happily ever after. Once all this drama is resolved, they'll live happily ever after, for ever and ever, till death do they part, amen. ] |
![]() ![]() great chapter.i like how mya noticed devin s will save can't wait for next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still a little suspicious of Blake, but wow, this Devlin guy...what's he trying to do? |
![]() ![]() hey you, ya needs to emails me! anyways! AW! Alex and Mya...so sweet... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so proud of myself. As soon as that Devin dude came into the bar I was like 'cougar', and he was. But maybe if Alex meets him in human form he'll be able to get the sent of his human side as well and track him better. Who knows, hehehehe. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() How come you only update at work? And if Ma and Alex were to have a baby would it be part human, part shapeshifter or one or the other? Have I told you how much I LOVE this story? (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() That picture thing is both sweet and a bit stalkerish |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and i love how often you update! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay I was entertaining this idea but now that you've ever so casually mentioned it, I'm sure of this theory; Blake is the rogue. D |
![]() ![]() Loved it. About time she had her overload! period. anyways, email me the sec you can. I went to doc and I may find out what's up with me and my pain and stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i liked the whole hysteria scene in her apartment it was funny |