Reviews for Shift
angie chapter 19 . 4/8/2009
great job well i loved this story
kaw97 chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
I agree with Nollie Marie - I like how you snuck that epilogue in there - since you always say "I hate writing epilogues..." - and this one just appeared - poof!

One little crit: What's the deal with people not knowing they're having twins? (This is the second story I have read like that recently.) I'm sure it is a rare possibility, but...I assume Mya had prenatal care - and that means at least one sonogram - and the technician must be pretty darn BAD at their job to not see two babies in there. The way sonograms are today, it's almost like a photo of the baby(ies). Yeah - I know of one acquaintance that was surprised by twins - but she was surprised a week or two BEFORE the birth, through a sonogram. Anyhoo...that's my little rant. The surprise twins thing makes a good story, but doesn't seem very realistic in this day and age - of course, this is a story about shapeshifters...why I am ranting about realism again? OK, then, forget all that. LOL (Don't take any of this to mean I don't like your story or your writing - because you know that I have rarely, if ever, criticized you.)

OK, now...I really liked this story - mostly because it was different and about an interesting concept. You are a GREAT writer! Keep it up.

I liked A New Paige too. I read all the reviews for chap 19 and thought it was funny how many people said, "Brett/Brent who?"
ShrimpoJewels chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
aw I liked the ending, slightly rushed but all around good

I absolutely love the line “They asked me if they could have one.” it's hilarious and totally them.
vio923 chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
I loved this story! The epi was cute. I would like to read Hayden's story - he deserves a HEA.

In the beginning of the story I actually thought that you would pair Mya up with Hayden and that she and Alex would be good friends. I quickly realized that wasn't going to happen. LOL

As always, you write fabulous stories. Have to say that I honestly don't remember Brett.
Lucy-the-bookworm chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
Ok first off I loved this story! Umm, I'm not sure who Brett is but I'm sure I'll love his story.

I also wanted to let you know you have a typo at the very beginning of the chapter.

I slid my arms to his waist and a let him practically drag me to the house. It should be "...I let him practically grag me..." just letting you know.

Again I loved it! Lucy
Twizler519 chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
I want a sequel, or a prequel, staring Hayden as the love of my life.

Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 19 . 4/7/2009

A great story. Very different from your normal story's but a good different. Can't wait to see what your next story is going to be about.

Hope a new Paige comes back soon, i was really liking it. Its another story that's different from your other writing.

Great work.

Katherine-the-greate chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
aw. cute ending. I hope there is a sequal! :)
Jen chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
lol, do we know who brent is? am i just drawing a complete blank?
slee5133 chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
aw yay. have you put pics up yet? oh and whos brett?
MiseryRevisited chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
i liked the end, some books leave you on the egde wondering about the future, you gave us a conclusion. I really enjoyed reading it. :]
TishDaFish chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
This story was very well pulled off, and your writing and plot lines are flawless as always, although I do have a crit - I wasn't able to 'absorb' myself in this story as I did with the rest of your's, I don't know why, but instead of leaving me aching for what would happen next, I was simply sastisfied to wait until the next chapter. Not that thats a bad thing, but yeah, just a note.

Yeah so anyways, great story reguardless, and yeah D.
book.babe15 chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
haha hayden that was so cute i loved the epilogue...the whole story actually!
Pink5288 chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
Aww! I love it! I'm sad it's over but it was a GREAT story! ]
In Love With Your Love chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
Ah! I am totally squealing like a little fan girl right now. lol. Again, I didn't see this coming!

Okay. First, "Eve blamed it on her temporary insanity over Blake’s condition..." ahaha. We finally agree on something, Eve and I. That's something I mentioned in the review I accidentally deleted; Eve was temporarily insane or something along those lines. :P

ha. It was funny when Benny was admitting the brothers weren't "monsters." HA! How you like them apples?

Ooh. My GOODNES! They're married and had little babies! That is just so freaking adorable and awesome! I LOVE IT! & ahahah. Hayden and Ethan asked if they could have one of the twins. What would they do if Alex and Mya said YES. ahaha.

aw. can't believe it's over already. :( I'll miss them and their cute babies, too! :P

I was going to start reading your other story, but you took it down! How sad. lol. When you mentioned it a few chapters back I was like, "WHAT? A new story?" I hadn't even noticed it. I can't wait to read it though! :)
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