I can not believe that it has taken me this long to finally read this story. It is good, but I have a few issues. (If you have not read this story yet you may want to do that before you read my review) First, what ever happened to Lilly? Tristan has been keeping her alive all this time. If he is no longer there did she die? I feel bad for Hansel. He is a lost little boy in a man's body looking for someone to love him and once he finds that someone I am sure that he will become a better person. I find Tristan to be shallow. The main reason he turned Hansel down is because he is overweight. Then he sees a handsome man and it is ok for that man to prey on him. I do not trust the prince. It feels like he is taking Tristan on as a conquest and once he has had him then things are going to go down hill. I hate the fact that they never really had a real conversation before they confessed their love. He said no one in town is nice to Tristan, but that not true, it is only the rich people treating Tristan like that. He is friends with the common people in town. The fact that the prince only sees the rich people makes me even more leery of him and I am surprised that Tristan was not offended by that comment. Tristan went through a lot of stuff and still stuck with his family. He would not just up and leave like that unless his family did something really bad to him and nothing like that happened. If he found his true love does that mean his curse is over or does he live the rest of his life with a basket under his chin? Why did he never even consider trying to figure out how to stop the curse? If there is so many people who get into trouble with strangers should there not be a protocol of what to do if you meet a stranger in the middle of nowhere? The way you described the fairy I thought it was going to be the visitor that turned out instead to be the prince. How do they know Tristan's father by the way? I was waiting for that explanation. The ending really does not fit with this story. I know that you were trying to add to the story with the French but I do not know enough French to translate it so I ended up skipping those parts. You may want to add a translation on the bottom.

Cute. Though I was a little bit eh when Marcel acted pretty much exactly like Hansel but Tristan is all like "Ooh I'm soo in love argh." when Marcel does it.

Very cute! This was a lovely story to read :)

I enjoyed this very much, thank you for posting it :)

that was charming, though Tristan was a bit dim, but that was cute too. :)

Enjoyed this

Aw :3 This story was so cute, there were a few errors tho... but it was a great story! :D
-RPS

This was a nice, cute read. :) I did notice that towards the end grammatical/spelling mistakes were starting to increase a little though.

I'm glad Tristan got his happily ever after though. 3

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and pretty funny in some parts. What more can you truly ask for in good conseince in order for a story to be great?

wow, this was really good ) i usually enjoy this fairy tale, but this version was the best i've ever read! i liked that he wasn't completely innocent what with the baker's son and the blacksmith ;) i just feel sorry for lilly, who's gonna water her now?

Clever and wonderful twists. Excellent job with different slants on old fairy tales. Bravo!

That was cute. A very feel-happy story. It's based on a fairy tale, yes?

That was great. But I must admit I was hoping for more lovin' between Marcel and Tristan ;p lol

What faery tale was this based off of?

A very squee worthy story. Thank you for brightening up my day!