I guess now they are no more cheater haha...jee I never like concept friends with benefits ewwwww

everyone knows the ending but what makes one read a story is the way you write the story good job :D

AW CUTE. AND THEY'RE FINALLY TOGETHER. After Grant saw them naked, I thought that there was going to be a sad, unfulfilled ending. But there wasn't! :D I'm very satisfied, muahaha.

I actually really love this one-shot. Finally, there is a balance in the relationship between the girl and the boy. I'm not saying it's wrong for a girl to be a virgin or for a guy to be a whore, but when literally every story is like that you'd think that we were still living in the 20s. Your story has a nice balance: the girl finds someone she loves, the guys dates many girls but he doesn't sleep around, and yet they still love each other. I like how you portrayed them and their situation and I really did love the ending, too. It was sweet :D

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I really like it!

Oh, I actually like this one. I thought they'd never end up together, you know, but they did so.. huzzah.

Amazing.

I really loved it. I wasn't exactly sure that it would have a happy ending-but they did. Which is great. Peter is just not the guy for Tubby. :)

I absolutely loved this story! I loved the writing style, it just flowed so well. I loved the ending, and honestly your writing was so well done I could feel the emotion...every single feeling of pain and sadness and happiness. It was great! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

I fucking love this story. Sorry for the language. But seriously, I teared up, which nearly never happens. Stellar stellar job!

so cute ! you should've named it legitimately :)

aw... such a nice one shot! loved it so much! hope u could make more stories like this... more power!

i love this story! this was so good! although in some parts the point of view got a bit confusing, i literally felt like squealing at some parts. wow true love. i read sapphires and emeralds before, but i found it too long and depressing. this oneshot got to the point and didn't need to involve several scary life problems like anorexia or total obsession. woow! good job! super sexy! i'm going to subscribe now :)

hahahahaha is kida horny but a the same time sweet

I loved this story! I feel that it has such a deep meaning to it and you have writen it in such a simple and beautiful way. It has a wonderful flow and if there are some parts that are awkward then they are so minimal that the reader can not detect them. Overall it is a wonderful story!