Oh shyte!

Did this just happen? Oh my God. What in the hell happened to Joel after security nailed him? CRAP.

And uh oh, our favorite drug lord is back next chapter...

I'm glad Mel made Roger go. He had to, he couldn't just stay there while is wife is all screwed up.

O, I wonder what's gonna happen with Joel. Can't wait. :)

OMG. Maybe Ace can help Mel? That'd be just... just epic. I mean, really. I've seen what drugs do to people, people I've known and how dirty, dirty the biz is. Crack babies, little kids getting shot for telling someone at school what they saw... God. :(

Anyway, I really hope Ace can help her get off the shyte.

:)

Yay! I'm back! My reviews this time might be shorter than the ones I've left ya before, but that's only cause' I'm wiped out.

This is fantastic, Roger at the Park! HA! I can just see it now. Ace seems like a cool guy, and I can't WAIT to meet Juri. He sounds kick arse awesome. Anyone fighting the drug dealers is a friend of mine. ;)

Aw, poor Bahiya. I'm happy she and Melissa got to talk a little, even though Bahiya probably didn't belive her. I know, I spelled it wrong but I'm in a hurry therefor my fingers type faster and I don't wanna do spell check. :)

Loved the funny and cute moments with her and Roger, I like the little switch from the dark, scary stuff once in a while to humor. Love it. :)

Gotta go, I'll be back in the pm to review more!

Skinky chapter. ;)

Ginger

Sorry that I haven't read and reviewed much of this, I've been really busy as of late and find myself only reading one chapter of your wonderful story a day. I'll try to read more this morning and maybe some more later this afternoon.

Melissa is such a amazing charrie, after all the crap she's been through she's still a good person. I love that. How nice of her to want Roger to see his wife right that minute.

Oh, another cliffie! On to the next one. :)

Oh, this was a great chapter. I mean, the whole story is freaking epic but this was awesome. Charming, Ezekiel is really starting to show his true colors, and it's not very pretty.

Great job.

I'm glad Melissa found someplace safe to hide! :] Thanks so much for updating! :D

Bleah. Ace. -_- I know most of your fans probably like him a lot, but he seems almost...I dunno...too nice for me? Lol, you're probably thinking 'what kind of girl is this? how can a person be too nice?' I mean, I don't hate him for being a daisy-sniffer or anything, but he makes me miss Ezekiel's calculating, cold, and detached personality. The differences between the two of them are as obvious a lumberjack at an anti-deforestation rally.

Speaking of Ezekiel, I can't WAIT to read his reaction to this entire mess.I'm hoping some heads will roll (preferably Blade's xD)

AND last but not least, glad to see you've hopped back on the "UPDATE EXPRESS." I'll sleep well tonight knowing that the next chapter is right around the corner. ;P

-Raye

Sorry I've been so tardy in rr'ing. Been really busy as of late but now I'm back. :)

Poor Roger, how awful. I really hope something bad doesn't happen to him or his wife.

Great chappie. :)

Haha I don't remember what I said exactly that's on the right track . I really liked this chapter! ) I didn't even remember about Ace and Juri haha. It's weird finding nice generous people in Metro. Isn't Juri the anti-drug guy? Wouldn't that make him and Ezekiel like archenemies?

I my gosh!

Hows Ezekiel going to even start to react to this!

Oh noes!

My review this time is simple:

I love Ace.

The end. lol

Again, a wonderful chapter. Keep it up :)

~J. Lynn

i wonder how ezekiel is going to react! :/ I hope Mel gets better! i do love her character! And what can I say about Ace...i'm falling head-over heels for him and his nice guy personality!

Keep it up! this story has amazing pace...i'm always waiting for the next chapter...and i'm never dissapointed!