You are well and truly an amazing writer. Your words flow with the intensity of emotions and descriptions. It's refreshing to read something so deep. Please keep writing, I want to know how this story ends.

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Aw...poor Melissa. I hope she can get out of the cage of such a miserable life...

Good characterization, and Cordelia also seems like a nice character (maybe just a minor one, but she does help to lighten the mood of the entire story).

Good going! It's even more fantastic than ever! Please continue!

This was such a good chapter :), I'm glad Melissa isn't completely alone. I like Cordelia a lot :)..

Aha! And so the plot thickens! Ezekiel seems like a highly interesting character...and I really wonder what made him say Melissa's different from everybody else. This is getting better! Keep writing!

This was AMAZING. The only problem with this is every other story I read on FP now will sound terrible compared to this. I can't wait for the other chapters, the drug king sounds like a real bad ss :)

This is good! I really feel for Melissa! Your writing style is very easy to understand, and GRAMMATICALLY EXCELLENT, which is rare, lol.

Please update soon! :D

~J. Lynn

I love this idea. Your fic has a somewhat grim start, but I do enjoy dark novels and stories. It seems that your character Melissa has a very deep personality-I'd like to know a whole lot more about her. I also like your title and summary; they're catchy.

Keep going!

~Toimi

P.S. I have a story about a British gang-girl on my account on FanFiction. It's called Black Light. You can find it on my profile page there at ~theoceanismyinkwell. (The spaces are mine so you can see the link.)

Again, great job! I can't wait to read more!