| Reviews for The King and the Courtesan |
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   BookAddiction24 chapter 23 . 10/20/2011 You just crushed my hopes and dreams :( 1. I HATE the idea of another guy coming into her life! UGH! Ezekiel ROCKS! 2. I want him to turn good! Ugh! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 22 . 10/20/2011 I cracked up so many times in this chapter :) I laughed really loud at the parts about: ~hon/schnookums ~the rap :) ~"I prefer something that actually requires talent" AHAHAHA! hilarious :) -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 21 . 10/20/2011 Ooooh! Someone's a little jealous ;) -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 20 . 10/20/2011 "I don't need thanked..." this doesn't make sense :P I started crying when he killed the man! I was listening to this sad-sounding song, and I actually started crying :O ~But I shoved all that down, deep down, and forced myself to be calm, complacent, and numb. Because that was just what good whores did.~ That was awesome! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 19 . 10/19/2011 ~"He found me and promised to pay all the bills if became an employee." (maybe it should say "if I became an employee.") ~I got so upset in the beginning! He said something about hiring her, and I got angry. I want him to ACTUALLY love her! :( ~I feel bad for Melissa. She's talking about someone else's love life. She's hearing someone talk about who they love, and she's never really loved anyone... that must suck :P -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 18 . 10/19/2011 Oh. My. Gosh. Does he actually like her? I'm pretty sure he does, but not exactly sure... -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 16 . 10/19/2011 Oh my gosh! Ezekiel is AWESOME! He's so smart! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 15 . 10/19/2011 Is he gonna kill someone? Is she gonna see it? Oh my gosh! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 14 . 10/18/2011 Does he actually like her? I have the feeling that he does... Does he? -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 13 . 10/18/2011 Editing Notes: ~Ezekiel leaned over to Garett and whispered something I couldn't here. (it should be "hear") ~A bell rang, and the fight began. I was shocked by how reserved the audience once. (it doesn't make sense) ~Kennedy was a monster, one that no one could fell. (it doesn't make sense) I love Roger :) He's awesome! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 12 . 10/18/2011 Oh my gosh! She has a lot of character depth! I didn't know how hard she had it. I like that she finally stood up for herself :) -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 11 . 10/18/2011 "...eyes that hid a thousand secrets and told a million lies." That was a really cool line! You're an awesome writer. You should become a famous author! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 10 . 10/18/2011 I really like Yogi and Cordelia. A couple years ago, I was in the play "King Lear" by Shakespeare. A character's name is Cordelia. I played her :) I love this story! -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 8 . 10/18/2011 My reactions: ~"You can stay with me." Oh my gosh! What's she gonna say? ~"I'll-I'll go with you." OH MY GOSH! SHE'S GONNA STAY WITH HIM! :D ~"He? Who is he? Melissa!" Aw! Poor Mimi :'( ~*the last part* OH MY GOSH! um... they're DOING IT! :O -Ally |
| BookAddiction24 chapter 7 . 10/18/2011 Ooh! Ezekiel is kind of scary, but kind of nice. :) I like him! It was smart of him to bring the drugs, or she would have gone crazy. I hate needles! At the last part, I swear, I was about to throw up! (not in a bad way) Whenever I go to my doctor and they make me get a shot, I freak out. I don't understand how people could do that for fun! :P -Ally |