Rosa seems really nice. I like her.

For a second, I thought she was going to say that Ezekiel was her brother, but I was wrong.

This story is so good!

-Ally

I'm happy that she excepted the offer :) I like Ezekiel.

I love this story!

-Ally

Yes! I definitely DO love Ezekiel! He's awesome!

Wow! He's giving her drugs? Wow.

The dress seems awesome! :)

I love this story! I wish I was reading it while it was still in process!

-Ally

Again, another great chapter :)

-Ally

Ooooh! :D

I like this Ezekiel guy. He seems cool :)

I love this story!

-Ally

I absolutely love this story! :)

Swallow more... as in...? ew :P

It's now officially in my favorites :)

-Ally

Wow! It took me almost 24 hours to finish this and yet it feels like I missed a lot of things.

I'm going to read it again and will leave a proper review...

But to truly, this story was well-written! EVEYTHING was organized and well-planned. Although a part of me wants to see Ezekiel's point of view. This man...is very dangerous, handsome yet mysterious. No wonder he succeeds.

Off to read again but I'm waiting for your one-shots!

After reading Dear Felicia, I moved on to this. Wow. You really are good. You are one of those few writers who write with realistic endings. A big slap to Pretty Woman (applause).

Ezekiel’s character is very consistent and one of the most interesting characters I’ve known so far. But I’m curious on why he chose Melissa (aside from the fact the hires people who are desperate and attracted to her long legs). He once said that he was disgusted with her at first. And it’s really sad that no matter how cruel you make him to be, I’m still attracted to him. LOL. He’s so mysterious. I wonder if that dude is capable of love. Maybe behind that strong exterior, he really is a coward. He likes to finish people immediately when things don’t go his way. Or maybe he’s just a misanthrope. Haha! I guess that’s the magic on writing with just one point of view. If you suddenly become bored, write a story about him since Melissa’s fate is already looking good.

And I noticed you don’t waste your characters. They were there for a reason. I liked it. Congratulations!

this story is so beautifully plots, the character developments, everything make it one of the most wonderful story here in fp.

of course, like all other girl-stuck-with-pimp stories i expect ezekial to love melissa at the end and they will live happily ever after. but he didnt budge any even when the story is coming to its end. so i lost all hope. but im not bit disappointed.

im glad u end the story like how u did (but a oneshot or an epilogue will be really great ;) )

continue writing great stories,ok?

kudos~

I just finished reading the entire story and i just wanna say that it was simply amazing! It was so exciting and emotional to read and you're just an amazing writer! You made it be perfectly clear how everyone was and what they felt without having to actually say it and just.. wow :D I actually started reading it when you updated the last chapter so i was super lucky to see it that last chapter!

I particularly loved that ezequiel didn't turn out to love melissa. Because it seems that in every story, the girl stands up for herself and the bad guy starts loving her which I've always felt that is cute but fake and not real at all. When ezequiel killed Blade I though that maybe you were after all gonna make it that ezquiel loves melissa but you didn't and i'm glad :) Your story was so realistic and yet had a happy ending which I loved too :)

It has seriously been one of the best stories I've read! I just have one question: you had said earlier that ezequiel had a motive to hire melissa ... at the end, was it just for sexual matters or was there another motive for him wanting melissa there?

Thanks so much! I enjoyed it a lot and couldn't stp taking abut it with my friends :D

Aww, man! I can't believe it's over!XC I loved this story so much! I like how it was a not-so-definite ending. I loved all your characters (even Ezekiel, who scared me). The future is finally looking hopeful for Melissa and I hope it stays bright for her.

P.S.

Love you!XD

Aw~ I found this chapter to be very very heart warming. I love how Floyd is willing to pay for all the facility and doctors for Melissa. He's such a nice guy! I have to agree with Ace, his personality is so perfect for a "comforting" kind of feeling. I hope Melissa and her son will be happy, no matter if she chooses to give him up or not.

OH MY GOD!o I can't believe Ezekiel let her live! I was so ready for her death and every thing! This has just made my day! I'm so happy that Melissa didn't get killed that I'm crying, literally crying!XD It's just so incredible!

Perfect. PERFECT ending.

This entire story was very well-written. I loved the characters because they all had faults-they were believable. And to me, characters are what make a story.

So, job well done. Congratulations on such a great story :)

Good luck with any future writing!

~J. Lynn

WOW, has it really been 2 years? Woah! First of all, congratulations on doing a fabulous job writing this story! Although I thought that Melissa's recovery was a bit rushed, I felt that the ending was done just right. I liked the ambiguity since life really is unpredictable, but at least Melissa finally realized that she is a strong person and can overcome her issues. I'd love to read a oneshot if you're willing to write one! Again, congrats! You're an amazing storyteller and I hope you continue to pursue your gift further! Thank you for this creation(: