Wow, intense chapter. Ezekiel, you gigantic bastard. On the one hand I"m surprised he left such a loose end, namely Melissa's life, and on the other hand, I'm not surprised by his choice of punishment. Ugh, bastard. I can't wait to see how this is all going to end... if Melissa does manage to thwart Ezekiel's "prophecy" of sorts or not...

update soon.

Wow, I love this story. One complaint I have is that the word "bourgeoisie" you used to mean like the elite class but from what I know of from my history class, that word means the middle class. I'm probably wrong but I thought to maybe mention it because it caught my notice.

I believe that I am offically hooked on your story. It is quite amazing. From the plot to the characters, if it is not jaw-dropping moments it is WHAT inspired situtations and I adore it. Is it bad that I check every hour to see if there has been a new chapter put up? I don't care I love this story. I found it a couple days ago and I couldn't stop reading. It is an addiction and it is definitely a good one! You are basically amazing. Thank you.

~Kara~

Hi again,

Sorry I just wanted to say insaw your character drawings and other drawings on your homepage. They are incredible! Your use of chiaroscuro is very impressive. Just out of interest what did you use on them? Water colour paints or pencils or maybe even gouache?

I would love to know as you create such a brilliant effect with them.

Garneau.

Hi.

This is a brilliantly written piece of work. I like the fact you dint shy away frmonth gory details and the harrowing reality that does occur in this world.

You have a very clear and concise writing style that is addictive to read.

As for the storyline, it is beyond intriguing. I remember reading an author's not where you mentioned something about your professor and the falsehoods of Pretty Woman. It must be an interesting class to sit through.

I am defiantly looking forward to the next chapter and what will happen if Ezekial does found out and confront her about the pregnancy. I wouldn't be surprised if he already knew.

I can't wait to see where you take this so please update soon,

Garneau.

I'm guessing she's gonna loose the baby.

Can't wait to see how he reacts when he finds out she was/is pregnant.

i am hooked to your story.

P.S The dog pic on your profile page is all kings of creepy!

WOW! Awesome, very cool that you actually answered my review!thanks! I freaking love KaC!. What can I say Blades death was a pleasant surprise for me. I’m a wicked fan and so I was excited to see an update :)

OMG MOAR. :D I love it! SO much. I can't believe I've read everything (so far ;) already!

I'm rooting for you!

Dude. Ezekiel Sexy

Poor blade, but he gets what's coming to him.

Maybe the kick from him to Melissa cause her to have a miscarriage, mehbeh?

That's what I think.

THANKS FOR TAKING TIME TO READ THIS!

That was so intense!XO I was on literally on the edge of my seat while reading this entire chapter! Man, Melissa's life is just turning from bad to worst. Now that Ezekiel knows that she's been talking to Blade (poor bastard) and also burrowed money from him, he'll definitely want to know why. I'm really nervous for what's going to come next. But I just wanted to say that I noticed something about Ezekiel. It might be my imagination, but I really think Ezekiel might be starting to show a little warmth to Melissa. I know I must be crazy for thinking that, but it seemed like you hinted at that, near the beginning when Melissa was trying to appease him. I'm crazy aren't I?:) Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be nervously waiting for it.

I'm still confused about how she got pregnant. Unless I messied something there is more to it than she just fell into the 0.01% percent of the population. Did he switch her pills with placebo's to get her pregnant on purpose. Or maybe I'm just reading to much into this lol. and I wish you would've let Blade see Melissa in Ezekiel's arms (or something in that effect to let Blade know who she "belonged to") so he could really know what mistake he made before he died.

There goes Blade! I still can't get over how calm Ezekiel is through all his actions after all these chapters! I'm still hoping Melissa can find a quick resolve to her situation_

ah! please update soon! love the story!

aw

dont end it here D:

anywho update soon :)

i can not believe this made me cry! i dont even know why im crying! SO MUCH INTENSE! i got scared when Ezekiel suddenly showed up! X_X im glad Blade died! but what'll Ezekiel do nexxt! i think he already knows that Melissa IS pregnant! OMFLOLLI! *~* cant wait for the chap~!