|Reviews for Enter With Care|
| chartonjeremiah chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Actually, this does not seem very forced to me. I love the opening two lines:
"These walls that crawl and worlds that spin
These veins that twirl beneath my skin"
and I love the stanza "touch". I love it!
| Isca chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
"These cries that render Heaven clear." Powerful phrasing!
My favourite section would have to be "Touch." The imagery within it is quite awe-inspiring. :)
"These mouldy walls that keep me home." Chilling. Creepy. Sad. Haunting.
"Taste these bitter rays of morning sun." AMAZING LINE! :D :D :D