Reviews for One Word
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 5 . 12/20/2009
Huh.

Thats really clever.

Actual.

It reminded me of this book I was reading not that long ago... But not. I really like what you've done.

Its witty and clever :)
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 4 . 12/20/2009
Awesome metaphor.

I love that last line. It made me laugh :D

And the thing is, it fits the whole thing :)

AWESOME!
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 3 . 12/20/2009
Yeah.

Interesting idea again...

Hm...
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Hah.

That's really clever.

I love the idea, thought the formattings a little peculiar... Especially for the way its written... Still. Really cool.
Little girl Big world chapter 6 . 10/31/2009
a good collection :)
Little girl Big world chapter 4 . 10/31/2009
an interesting metaphor. well done
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 10/31/2009
aw this is so sad
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
i like this.

"everythingwouldruntogether" very creative.
LetYourImaginationSoar chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
These are hilariously funny, so, I am surprised that the one review only addressed the first chapter, because the second chapter is even funnier! But the first chapter, I do have to say, is excellent, just the same. Ha ha... specially the chapter titled pickett.
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
omg very original idea.

spaces. the spaces between each word are so important. with out them everythingwouldruntogether. we're use to putting them into our text. is that why the space between you and me has gotten so big. your just use to the distance? spaces.

I am speechless. It is truly amazing. Like the "everythingwouldruntogether" it is very cute. Excellent.