Lol, that's cute.

That was so adorable I died like 3 times during it overdosing on all that sweetness.

I loved this story !

Hahah this was hilarious! Loved it :)

i love this so much hahahaha. it's so sweet and diabolical at the same time. keep writing! mwah

Omg cute!

This was a really good story! I loved it :)

V. good :)

This story was too freaking cute! I couldn't stop smiling at the end. I thought she had gone mental at one point in the story and that this was some sort of psychological thriller ha ha , but I loved it! :)

You are a genius. Period.

It's so cute. The way Trevor comes for Sage at the end of the story. Cuteness overload. Think about continuing it.

xoxo,
JustWish

For a second there I was worried she might have a mental disorder which could have been cool, but hey, your story works just fine :p
Im kidding. It was awesome, really sweet and very well written. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Dont drive drunk. Byeee

I think this is my third time reading this. The first time was prob back in 2010. I used to be a lurker. I didn't have an account etc. but this story was just too awesome that i'm "reviewing" it. You're descriptions and words you use to describe the character's emotions really give life to the characters. It's very vivid and realistic. I enjoyed the chemistry between the two main characters and I love how you added the nerd in your story and in this case samuel was a real nerd with the awkward personality and awkward looking face, not some cute nerd who could really be gorgeous underneath the glasses and hair.
This was a fun oneshot. It's light and has a happy ending; all that jazz. I'll prob read it again a year later or something when i'm craving a good oneshot haha. awesome fluff and pretty good considering you wrote it during a brain fart.

Dude, I just love this story. No matter how many times i read it, it never gets old and it always feels like I'm reading it for the first time. It's hilarious, sweet, and makes me go awwwww. Plus the chemistry and dialogue between the characters are real and flow very smoothly. And I love how you describe Samuel mathersons acne prone face as a bacterial wasteland lololollol. I wish you'd continue to write because you write amazing oneshots but I know you have a life and must be a busy person so I'll be content with "Thor" :)))))

.this story is seems like something that would happen to i wish it was a story and not a one