Reviews for lovegrind
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
All of the sudden in the ending you use capital I, but in the first two stanzas it's i. It seemed like an odd change to me.

I like the piece. It's definitely something I can relate to and I would guess all writers can. I also liked the rhyming. A lot of time random rhyme schemes bother me, but this was more like random rhyming than an inconsistent rhyme scheme. It added a little something to the piece. Nice job.

PS. I haven't seen you around the Review Game lately. You should come back and participate in the Review Marathon this coming weekend.
S.L. Gunn chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
not that i know what you've written in recent weeks passed, but i'm guessing this is on top!

very creative :)

SLGunn