Reviews for The Story You Shouldn't Know
Juliet Scar chapter 18 . 11/30/2013
AWWWWWHHH! Wait, what am I saying?! It's JOSH for goodness sakes
Juliet Scar chapter 17 . 11/30/2013
YOU ARE FABULOUS. I was so blown away when Josh didn't kill her the first time and instead KISSED HER. Oh gooolllllly goodness jezzz He freakin KISSED HER! I know you know this but I am so surprised. And that happened really long ago but I am still stunned. You are so dang talented, it's enviable
Juliet Scar chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Ohhhh this is gettin exciting. You are VERY VERY great at writing introductions that just pull the reader in _ I already know this will be a riveting story OOoOooOOoOooooooo
Eins chapter 3 . 10/28/2013
I read this story years ago but lost it when my laptop broke and I've Finally found it again. Which is awesome because I was -and still am- truly enchanted by it. Your writing style is wonderfully unique and this is one of the rare stories that I can and will read again and again.
iluv2bweird chapter 30 . 10/22/2013
helloooooo, umm awkward... xD i dont know if im legally allowed to do this so thats why im writing this, any im writing a report on good versus evil and i used a quote from this... i hope you dont mind :\
Dominique Diane chapter 33 . 8/26/2013
Your story deserves a really good review, but sadly, I suck trying to express how wonderful this story was. It made me realize a lot of thing that I suppose only my mind knows. Sometimes I had to some parts, to understand completely, such as the wise explanations that Satan's seventh son said to Ana, also the bizarre ideas they had were times that I would get frustrated at Ana, for being so childlike in some aspects, but then I would realize that she was in fact a kid, with a hard life full of lies. She experience regret in many forms, over-thinking was one of them. But still she managed to be strong in some way, tried really hard to help people before thinking about herself, and that's what made her special, not her beauty or perfection, but the fact that she could see the good in everyone just as Safia said in the last chapter to Hussein's kids. It took Josh several years to get the courage to finish what he started, to stand up from his dirty corner, to stop regretting his decisions and go for what he wanted but finally to established the balance in the world.
One of the few stories I had read that has a theme, which is what makes me believe in the way you write, that made me change my mind in different ways.
Regards,
Diane.
HI chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
PLEASE PUBLISH THIS WHY DOES THIS ONLY HAVE 972 REVIEWS BLAAAAFDHCTYVTVYCTSXZVZGJUY
my princess ending chapter 33 . 8/4/2013
I don't know what to say about this story's ending. Oh My Gosh. Like, there's no epilogue about Anna and Josh; nothing about how happy they are in the end. I understand what happened now but I'm just not quite satisfied. I really do wish there is a sequel but I, myself, understand that there's no way of happening because in an indirect way, you know they're happy.
So, I absolutely love your writing style. The way you constantly use italics to emphasize. I seem to always skim the chapter before reading it because well, you have to admit, this story literally moves at a snail's pace.
I have no idea what to say. I'm speechless about how this ended. This is so irritating because I'm not satisfied. Oh My Gosh. Ugh.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 30 . 8/3/2013
WAIT I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT HAPPENED.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 29 . 8/3/2013
But you can't do this to me. Oh My Gosh. You can't just leave Anna dead while Josh is still alive. Holy shizzz. This is too much for me. I'm so irritated. Of all times he chose to be selfish, he didn't choose to be selfish now. I can't believe this. But anyway, there's one chapter left, I hope something good will happen.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 25 . 8/3/2013
I CAN'T DEAL WITH THIS. Why is Anna so irritating at times? Frickkk. Technically, the relationship has been one sided the whole time because Anna never fully loved Josh if she didn't accept him for what he was, a devil. Like, after 16(?) years of doing something and feeling passionate about it, you can't just drop it and never do it again. Basically, Anna doesn't understand and she's been taking Josh for granted. I am done with her until she shows some gratitude to the things he's done.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 20 . 8/2/2013
FINALLY. And I was wondering when she would realize it. Oh My Gosh. But still, I think Hussein should've died because I still see him as a problem between Josh and Anna. Frickkkkk. My feeling right now are too much for me to handle so I'm just gonna continue reading.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 12 . 8/1/2013
Even though you've written the next chapter already, I AM BEGGING YOU NOT TO BRING HUSSEIN BACK. PLEASE.
Also, I thought it was kind of weird how Josh "suddenly fell in love with her" because up until now, it seems that he hates her. I don't get it. Did realizing that they're soul mates make him love her or what?

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
I think it's so cute that Josh's mark is dark while Anna's is really light. Even with a pounding head, I can still understand what's going on so your writing isn't bad. :) It's not that confusing at all, really.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
You see, this is the kind of story that I would probably read again after I'm done reading it the first time. But then again, this story literally moves at a snail's pace yet so much happens. I don't know how that happens. Ugh.
Speaking of "ugh", I think that word describes Hussein very very well. He's so irritating and forceful, the kind of men I hate, and he doesn't respect his girlfriend. What a hoe.

With love,
my princess ending
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