Reviews for The Story You Shouldn't Know
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 22 . 12/12/2014
Great chapter! I was afraid that something bad was going to happen! I'm glad that Josh came in and saved the day!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 17 . 12/7/2014
I really like Kane...I don't know why, but he is a very interesting character. I hope he's in the later chapters.
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 9 . 11/29/2014
I really liked this chapter! I liked the interaction between Kane and Josh-it was just great! Anyway, off to read more!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
Wonderful opening chapter! I love all of the detail you put into describing it! Great description of the headmistress. The first half of the prologue was probably my favourite-though I did like it all. Great work!
guest chapter 30 . 5/18/2014
I think the best song to this chapter is 'lay me down' by the dirty heads.
DragonOwl chapter 33 . 2/25/2014
Sorry the login didn't work a minute ago, so that previous guest review was by me! Anyway, I love wolf so much - I think it's his wise word stuff and the fact I thought Josh said he was a yoda teacher when I first read the sentence!
Guest chapter 31 . 2/25/2014
I really loved reading this story - it had such a detailed and thought out way of looking at good and evil. I loved Wolf especially, and I'm really glad that Safia and Hussein survived! you created so many characters that I love, and I loved Josh and Anna together so much, especially when Josh had to deal with his new found emotions! It was incredibly realistic and so much more than I expected to read - I clicked on just to see and I got drawn to it after the first few paragraphs - and I really loved the philosophical side to it. It is a thought provoking amazingness that more people should know about! I feel sad for Marcus/ Wolf though but I really liked the twist at the end. Thank you for an amazing amazing read!
Juliet Scar chapter 31 . 12/1/2013
ahahahaa you tied everything together oh-so-perfectly. I'm beginning to think you based Anna off of YOU, with her old, constant strive for perfection ;) Even the whole them running away had a purpose in the end. I thought the previous chappie had been the last but I shoulda checked. This ending was quite clever because it seemed to actually make sense with the whole morals in humans thing! You are FABULOUS!
Juliet Scar chapter 30 . 12/1/2013
UGH. When I started this chapter, the last one (29), I went straight to the end because I couldn't wait and if the end was depressing, I would have just not finish the story LOLOLOL ahhaha I am so logical, aren't I?! I loved this story, but it was kind of... it had a negative effect on my feelings so... ya. Just too serious for me, personally. BUT IT WAS SODA DANG ADDICTING and WELL WRITTEN that even when I wanted to stop, I couldn't and ohhhmiiiiigoodness. You're so talented! You should consider writing something more lighthearted though. Not stereotypical but, like, less angering and depressing I suppose. It's just a suggestion! You really do have a gift for writing. This story was so unimaginably complex and I don't know how you did it but you did. HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THIS STUFF?! It's so detailed and has so much characterization and the fact that you somehow, made up the basic storyline seems so impossible to me! It's so [insert positive word such as 'amazing'] to me how you planned things so well and, goodness, I am writeless b/c of your amazingness. I read the authors notes occasionally and saw that you planned Wolf's coming back 10 chapters beforehand I was like WHAT THE HECK? How? Cuz for me, it's like, comes as it comes or it gets boring and you're all, lemme plan this whole thing and still put an extraordinary amount of passion in every word. Pretty nice, efficient pattern you've got there. Who thought you it? Or did you learn by yourself? KEEP UP THE [insert overly awesome word] WORK!
Juliet Scar chapter 28 . 12/1/2013
This story... this cliffhanger... this "Josh froze. Anna." business... it's thoroughly KILLING me.
Juliet Scar chapter 24 . 11/30/2013
Oh goodness Josh ruins things. Not again does he ruin things. He ruins them TWICE :[ I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT
Juliet Scar chapter 20 . 11/30/2013
OH GOODNESS THE THREE WORDS THAT CHANGED EVERYTHING! I'm pretty sure Josh is going to do something that messing things up for a bit though. Maybe it's the replacing of his father ... :3
Juliet Scar chapter 18 . 11/30/2013
AWWWWWHHH! Wait, what am I saying?! It's JOSH for goodness sakes
Juliet Scar chapter 17 . 11/30/2013
YOU ARE FABULOUS. I was so blown away when Josh didn't kill her the first time and instead KISSED HER. Oh gooolllllly goodness jezzz He freakin KISSED HER! I know you know this but I am so surprised. And that happened really long ago but I am still stunned. You are so dang talented, it's enviable
Juliet Scar chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Ohhhh this is gettin exciting. You are VERY VERY great at writing introductions that just pull the reader in _ I already know this will be a riveting story OOoOooOOoOooooooo
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